Ghazal Muskura K Mil..

NaaZS Butt said:

Kun u ki soch itni choti thi kya me wasty..
thanks 4 liking..

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Nahi ap ke pehle ashar to mujhe average lage but ye wale zabardast they

Noor E Seher said:

Nahi ap ke pehle ashar to mujhe average lage but ye wale zabardast they

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Hmmmm thanku again..wese b ye boht pehly ki likhi sb..ab to likhta b ni..

NaaZS Butt said:

Hmmmm thanku again..wese b ye boht pehly ki likhi sb..ab to likhta b ni..

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Likha karein you have the skills

dil-e-chaak sab hen mundamil
jo ho teri karam-e-nigah idhar
jo ho teri nigah e karam idher

sir bas lafzon ki tarteeb ko change kia hope ap koacha lgay ga


yahan apni apni chah me..
sabhi mudahnat se rangy hue
is lafz ki smjh nahi aye shayed kuch spell mistake he


main b muskura dun gham-e-zeest me
mujhe muskura k mil...
outstanding waaaah

over all bhetreen

Asad Rehman said:

dil-e-chaak sab hen mundamil
jo ho teri karam-e-nigah idhar
jo ho teri nigah e karam idher

sir bas lafzon ki tarteeb ko change kia hope ap koacha lgay ga


yahan apni apni chah me..
sabhi mudahnat se rangy hue
is lafz ki smjh nahi aye shayed kuch spell mistake he


main b muskura dun gham-e-zeest me
mujhe muskura k mil...
outstanding waaaah

over all bhetreen

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Hmmmm sach me galti ha..ya to karam ki nigah Hona chahiye tha ya nigah e karam..aur mudaahnat mtlb aao Bhagat..khush'aamd jhoot wgera..
Shukkria pasand krne aur rehnumayi k liye..

Nice sharing..!!

bohat khobsoorat intekhab.... wah