Afssana....

Discussion in 'Urdu Poetry' started by Khudeeja Bashir, Jan 3, 2012.

  1. Khudeeja Bashir Popular Pakistani

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    Ikk Shakhas kii Zidd hai Mujhey Kirdaar Banna ker......Afssana Likho aur Mera Naam na ayee....

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    Wa ji Wa kia Baat hai apki..............
    Waise na ...............wo na.............Shair Na.............Bara Technical kaam kerwana Chah raha hai Writer sey :giggle: /Afsana nigaar sey..........

    per gal yeh hai keh naam na aaye.............teh kirdaar ka jahan tak taluq.......

    Youn Phir Raha hai Kaanch ka Paeker liye Huae
    Ghafil ko yeh GumaaN hai keh Pathr nah aaye ga

    Poet: Faraz Uncle:p..kithey Uncle Parh ker Aa hii nah jaein.........yeh kahan sey aa gaii merii rishtey daar :eek:

    Khush Rahyie/AmeeN

    Assalam_O_Alykum


  3. Khudeeja Bashir Popular Pakistani

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    Wa-salam...Shair hai akhir.... baat too technical he karnii thii....aasan Lafzoon mein apna Mud'aa kaisay bata sakta hai:)

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    issi say related aik aur sh'eir yad aa gaya hai mujhey:) ....:flower: .Muhabbat Dukh utha ker bhi Muhabat hai.....Mera Kirdaar hai Aadat nhn:flower:

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    han je bilkul.....tabhi hum boltey hein...yeh wakhrii makhlooq-e-khuda hai...........Special cases hein yeh :giggle:Last mein aa ker jab Gaddi nikal jaye gii.............yeh bol daein gey...............jab baat kehny gaye thae....jo kehnii sii...reh gaii wo baat sub baat.oun keh baad.............hunnn Faii'dah bhala..............aur uskeh baad lay dey keh............Sagar ko paker laein gey ya devdas :p..........Saray jahan ka dard humare jiger mein hai....................:(

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    hum ney tou kirdar bhi badltey daikhey janab.....4 paisoun kii khatir................App kiss sadii mein lagi phir rahii hein ......;)

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  7. Khudeeja Bashir Popular Pakistani

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    Issi saddi mein hoon Behnaa....Bohat kuch hum ney bhi badaltey daikha hai....phir bhi hum pur Umeed hein...:)Na Umeedi too kuffar hai....:)

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    je beshak:):flower:

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