My Designed Ghazal "Rehnay Dau" *Silent Smile*

Assalam u Alaikum,

Kuch dinon pehlay design kerda ghazal "Rehnay Dau" hazir e khidmat hai. Umeed hai ke tamam doston ko yeh kawish passand aaye gi

Bohot Khush Rahen

bus na yeh..wo na .. saaqi wala nah hota tou overall Acacha hai Qalam buht
Wah je Wah ...
unn key chehray kii baat ho jaye
Aaj zikr-e-gulaab rehny dou
mujhe ek hii aataa tha sh'er
aur pata bhi
yeh poora ghazl hai ...ab pata chala hai
beautifuly done by u Masha'Allah
khush rahyie
Ameen

Aik Chehray peh dhayyan ab bhi hai...
merii khawaish jawaan ab bhi hai...

kaun ho ga nishaney per uss key
pass uss key kamaan ab bhi hai

he he ...........

Assalam_O_Alykum

Walaikum-us-Salam,

Bundle of Thanks for appreciation

Mjhe yeh poetry koi khas passand nai aai Per Men nay yeh poetry sirf or sirf iss shair ki khatir design kee:
Sirf chokhat ko choom lo unki,
baqi saray sawab rehnay dau...

Wah bohot khoob
Hua jo teer e nazer neemkash to kya hasil?
Maza to tab hai ke seene ke aar paar chalay

Bohot khush rahen