My own designed Ghazal "Hamm"

Assalam u Alaikum,

Haal hi men mera passandeda kalam orr design kerda ghazal hazir e khidmat hai, umeed hai ke tamam doston ko passand aaye gi

bohot khush rahen

Assalam_O_Alykum!
tou goyya app shair kisam kii makhlooq bhi hein
buht Aacha likha hai je
Presentation bhi umdah kii hai
buht khush rahyie/ameen

Walaikum-us-Salam,

Nai g shaa'ir too nahi bass kabhi kabhar yeh shughal bhi apna letay hain.. Shairi bohot mushkil kam hai, yeh shairi sirf men nay design kee hai likhi hoee too azeem shaa'ir mohsin g kee hai

Abhi tak men nay apni zaati sirf aik shairi "maddad" design kee hai orr woh yeh hai

http://www.pakistan.web.pk/threads/maddad.3618/

Passandedgi ka shukriya..

bohot khush rahen

chalo shuker hai Allah je ka app Thorae shair hein..poorey nahinn..hum waise he ghabratey hein iss makhlooq sey...kahin yeh humein aa dherr lay..apna deewaan suna'ney nah lag jaye...ab inkey attack ka koii bharosaa nahin hota nah je..nah koii waqt-e-mouqarerrah

check kerty hein after namz-e-zohar...

khush rahyie

Shairon say Ghabrana kaisa.. oo acha shayad yeh laug apni shairi zabardasti sunate hain islye.. theeek

Thanks Saad Bhai

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oo...aacha shayed iss liye yeh khud ghabraye rehty hein

very nice Design Janaab
keep it up
Thanks

Assalam u Alaikum,

Absar bhai, itz really a nice feeling to see your comments on my designing poetry. Bohot khushi hoee, Thank yew so much for liking it..

bohot khush rahen