Poem Sometimes in life, We feel so blue

Discussion in 'English Poetry' started by adina, Aug 1, 2012.

    adina New Member

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    sometimes in life we feel so blue
    but someone, somewhere is not as happy as you!
    somewhere far at the border when a soldier sleeps,
    missing his loved ones he silently weeps!

    somewhere a mother painfully sighs
    because her newborn did not open her eyes!

    somewhere a poor dad silently cries,
    when he sees his son begging for a bowl of rice!

    somewhere in an orphanage a little girl is sad
    when she misses her mom and dad!

    so at Times a reason to smile,
    you may not have any,
    JUST SAY TO YOURSELF THAT U R HAPPIER THAN MANY

    "because life is beautiful and its not always blue

    &

    someone. somewhere is not as happy as you!!!:):):)

    tony_files New Member

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    that's true.... thousands of places in our emotional life we feel so blue but millions of persons are more than pitiable condition in which we are right now... no matter what happens to you just smile a little bit at least. but if you cry no worries... roota bhi wohi hai jis mein rony ki himat ho....hahahhahahah;) not funny that's true...
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    Sana Ahamed Well-Known Pakistani

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    Superb good work...

    Freeda New Member

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    so true. whenever we dont have enough money to buy a certain item, we should never moan or complain...we should think of those people that have no money at all, even to buy themselves abit of food. So always be thankful to whatever life or position you are in..because someone somewhere is always worse off than yourself...

    saadat tahir New Member

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    A beautiful and well conceived poem.... speaks of important contemporary issues.
    The first 4/5 of the poem is dead serious in content and context....i pause for any serious patriot.
    I loved reading it...balanced and poetic, written with a feeling caring heart.
    However i must add...the poet ended on a rather non serious note...and to keep the beauty and tempo of the poem it would be advisable to keep this in mind

    Overall great poem...:)
    sat
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    noor-e-kainat Popular Pakistani

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    gud job
    everyone in this era believes that money is everything that they buy solid things as well as rich emotions such as care,respect and the most important feeling PEACE but they can't do this.
    poet keeps the rhythm of the poem and ends on glorious advise.
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    Sana Ahamed Well-Known Pakistani

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    Agreed
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    noor-e-kainat Popular Pakistani

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    THANKS

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