Poem "Would that"

I loved you from the core of my heart
For you my heart was like a toy in a mart
Your love was sole deception
Of that I had no conception
I trusted you blindly
But you deceived me so finely
You didn't care for my feelings refine
The sorrow inflicted on me, how to define
Still it's hard to forget you
"Would that"
It had been the intensity of your love too!

WOW......Awesome Poem.....Real Human feelings......Thanx 4 sharing Dear.....

u r welkm g. Is haqeer ki adna si kawishen hn or kuch nai.

Assalam_O_Alykum!
Aray Wah Siso
Bara piyara likhtey ho app
buht khush rahyie/ameen

Inn Khawahisshoon ka tou koi Torr hee nhn hai Dear....Hazrat Ghalib bhi farma ker gayee hein....Hazaroon Khawahiss'hein aisi k her Khawahish per Damm nikley....Bohot Nikley marey Aarm'aan Phir bhi kam nikley...

siso ye Ghalib uncle ki khawaish ka tazkara nahinn kerring..........yeh na mujhe lagta hai Kawish hundi hai means koshish ki barii siso...........creation means

Haan ji Haan ji aap bilkul theek keh rahi hein I agreed Per ki keryee

wonderfull.... love it...

But... keep smiling

"In Most of my prayers,
i cant control on my tears,
un-intentionally,
i might hurt someone,
i get shivers,
with all these fears,
O Heart!!!!,
Should have thought before,
What for now,
all these swears,
Tell Me!!!!
how could you do this,
with loved ones,
with the dears,
In Most of my prayers,
i cant control on my tears."
(Sajid)

Beautiful...... But control ur Tears...be Happy