Nazm Dunya ki mehfilon se ukta gaya hon By Allama Iqbal

[Syeda Rumessa]

 

[Syeda Rumessa]

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[Ajwah]

@Syeda Rumessa my fvrt poem.
daman main koh k ek chota sa jonprha hu... bht pasnd hai mjhe ye
Thanks for sharing

 

[Mahsa]

Very Nice

 

[Sajjal]

Bohat Umdaa!

 

[M Shah]

@Syeda Rumessa ..wahhh kya share kar daala aap neee ...is nazm k sath meri bht se yaadein juri hai ..aur ye mai ne poora yaad bhi kiya thaa ..mai aur merai urdu k teacher miyan sir aksar ye parhtai thai ..hamara school bht bara thaa ..sub se ooper walai portion jahan chaman huwa karta thaa ..drakht k neechai baithai garmiyo ki dhoop mai ..ek shair wo aur ek shair mai sunaata tha baaqi bachai apnai kamo mai masroof rehtai ..wo 60 age ka thaa aur aksar kehta chalo mudassir bhaag jaatai hai is duniya se kahi dooor ..wo bht falsafi aur deep insaan thai ..

@Asad Rehman . @Imal . @yusra avais

 

[Asad Rehman]

@Syeda Rumessa Poetry pay kia comment karon
Ap ka intikhaaaab zbrdast he sis je

 

[Asad Rehman]

@M Shah
Mujhay bhi yaaad thee magar bhoool gia ab to

Or such men ap ne jo situation btaye khud ko wohi ln mehsoos kia
Hamaray urdu k lecturer bhi kuch esay he thay bohat sweeet bohat polite bass yadeein he reh jati hen

 

[yusra avais]

@M Shah This poem takes you to another world.....aur jub tuk issay parhty parhty banda ikhtatam tuk pohanchta hai...tub tuk ye sub reality bun jany ki khahish itni strong hojati hai...iss poem ka saher hamesha say bohet strong raha hai mujh pay...aik dafa parhny say tassali hi nahi hoti...iss dur say k kahin saher na toot jai mai issay dobara parhny lagti hon... kaissy kaissy khayal thay na iqbal k ...kia likh dia na Allama saheb nay

wahhh kya share kar daala aap neee ...is nazm k sath meri bht se yaadein juri hai ..aur ye mai ne poora yaad bhi kiya thaa ..mai aur merai urdu k teacher miyan sir aksar ye parhtai thai ..hamara school bht bara thaa ..sub se ooper walai portion jahan chaman huwa karta thaa ..drakht k neechai baithai garmiyo ki dhoop mai ..ek shair wo aur ek shair mai sunaata tha baaqi bachai apnai kamo mai masroof rehtai ..wo 60 age ka thaa aur aksar kehta chalo mudassir bhaag jaatai hai is duniya se kahi dooor ..wo bht falsafi aur deep insaan thai ..

Bohet khoobsurat yadain hain apki ... aur phir jaisy naqsha kheencha aap nay wohi asad lala wali baat..khud ko wahin mahsos kia, Achi yadain bhi naimat hoti hain na...karri dhoop mai chaon jaissi <3

 

[yusra avais]

@Syeda Rumessa Beautiful sharing, You've a good taste in poetry