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  • Asad Rehman

Nazm Ek dard tha By Amrita pretam

Discussion in 'Urdu Nazm' at Pakistan.web.pk started by Asad Rehman, Jun 27, 2019.

  1. Asad Rehman

    Asad Rehman Super Star Pakistani

    ایک درد تھا​

    ایک درد تھا
    جو سگریٹ کی طرح
    میں نے چپ چاپ پیا ہے
    صرف کچھ نظمیں ہیں
    جو سگریٹ سے میں نے
    راکھ کی طرح جھاڑی ہیں

    امرتا پریتم​
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  2. Ellaf khan

    Ellaf khan Popular Pakistani I Love Reading

  3. Asad Rehman

    Asad Rehman Super Star Pakistani

  4. intelligent086

    intelligent086 Popular Pakistani

    عمدہ انتخاب
    شیئر کرنے کا شکریہ
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  5. Falak

    Falak Super Star Pakistani I Love Reading

    @Asad Rehman The story was well told, and the flow was superb. The rhymes were also well crafted, which helped make the emotions so strong. :) Thanx for sharing
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