Discussion in 'Pyar Ishq aur Mohabbat Kaddah' at Pakistan.web.pk started by Asad Rehman, May 23, 2019.
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Jugnoon has been symbolized as HOPE, beautiful.
Beautiful is the word for this....very capturing and deep poem. love it! Even though i have read it before, It really touched me again, why because i feel the depth of it....It's a beautiful piece, I enjoyed it. I felt as if someone knew how deep down, inside this broken heart really feels. It made me happy, and I took minutes after reading it, thinking about it, wondering if it would ever happen again. I've seen pieces of work like this, just flow from the heart and soul, but yet it is wonderfully put together, making a beautiful portrait for everyone else to see, and take in. Some can take a look at it and judge it as another poem, but when I saw it, I voted it as the most amazing yet. So, Thank you. For sharing this outstanding piece with everyone else, including me. 'This is very breath taking.
@Ellaf khan thank you
@Mishaikh Bohat shukria sir
Ap yakeeen nahi karein gi post kernay say pehlay shayed 4 ya 5 bar parhi
Us say pehlay bhi parhi hue he lekin har bar Kahin aur he lay jati
Kia fun he Gilzar sahab k passs
Or ek fun ap k passs I wish He could read your comments On this poem
@Asad Rehman God Gifted talent i would say...
@Asad Rehman umeed hasrat or rasta yhan bebasi ki alamat k tur py bayan keya ha poet na me ya nazam phle br parhi ha mgr ranj or hasart main doob k jis khushish ka ya zkir h wo bht andr tk mahsos ki ha I can relate it with my life that's why I felt pain of every single word ...amazing one thnx for sharing it