Ghazal Jab kisi ko manana parta hai, Khud se bahir to aana parta hai

[Ramish Jaan]

Aslamo ele kum sathio,naik Ghazal ap kibisarto kinazr kar raha ho,n ap ki qeemti ara kaintzar rahe ga waslam Mukhlis Ramish Jaan

jab kisi ko manaana paRta hai
khud se baahir to aana paRta hai...

eyk hum hi nazar nahi atte
raste me zamana paRta he

kya khaien kaise muskurate hain
jab kabhi muskuraana paRta hai

Khud se jo kashmakash si chal nikle
Khud se Khud ko mitana paRta he

tuu nahi to gham-e-jahaan hi sahi
dil kahi to lagana paRta hai

muntazir ho na ho koi ramish
lauT ke ghar to aana paDta hai
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[Sagar Mardanvi]

bhot khob choti behar may kamal kiya hai...kya kahay kasay muskuratay hai....jab kabi muskurana parta hai...wah bhot khob

 

[Ramish Jaan]

ASlamo ele kum Sagar bhai bohat mohabat he ap ki ap ke yeh alfaz qeemti sarmya hai,n mere liye bohat mamno.n ho,n ap ka waslam Mukhlis Ramish jaan
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[Heer]

faypal wrote:

Wa Alaikum Salaam
wah wah wah kia kehny.
boht aala gazal likhi hai ap ny.
keep writting, n keep sharing...

 

[Ramish Jaan]

Aslamo ele kum her ji bohat shukriya Ghazal ko pasand kiya ap ne dard hi to ishaar me dhalta he Dard bhi unhe hi mehsos hota he jo khud dard ki doulat se ashna hote hai,n
waslam Mukhlis Ramish Jaan
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[Ramish Jaan]

shukriya Dilwala bhai
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[Mustafa faraaz]

ramish ji good sharing

 

[Mir Shahid]

Assalam elecum muklis Ramish bhi....
aap ka unwan na hi muja be-had mutasir kiya aor ma is misra ma kho sa gaya... jub kisi ko manana parta ha tu kiya hota ha aak naqsha sa zehan ma bunta gaya aor jaisa aak khani ka khakha sa bun gaya... phir aap ki ghazal ka pehla shair parha tu mera khiayal sahi nikla ka bhot khobi sa bhot gehrahi ma haqiqat ko bayan kiya ha aap na... such ha ka insaan apni ana ko qurban ker ka hi kuch hasil kerta ha... sayad isi ki intiha "Ishaq" ha jis ko hum subah dophar shaam perta aor sunta hain lakin is ka ehsas sa bilkul na ahshan rehta hain... is ka liya is ma utar ker deikna zarori ha aor hum utarna ka liya taayar nahi hain...

muntazir ho na ho koi ramish
lauT ke ghar to aana paDta hai

 

[Ramish Jaan]

ramish ji good sharing

Bohat shukriya Mustafa bhai mohabat he apki
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[Ramish Jaan]

Assalam elecum muklis Ramish bhi....
aap ka unwan na hi muja be-had mutasir kiya aor ma is misra ma kho sa gaya... jub kisi ko manana parta ha tu kiya hota ha aak naqsha sa zehan ma bunta gaya aor jaisa aak khani ka khakha sa bun gaya... phir aap ki ghazal ka pehla shair parha tu mera khiayal sahi nikla ka bhot khobi sa bhot gehrahi ma haqiqat ko bayan kiya ha aap na... such ha ka insaan apni ana ko qurban ker ka hi kuch hasil kerta ha... sayad isi ki intiha "Ishaq" ha jis ko hum subah dophar shaam perta aor sunta hain lakin is ka ehsas sa bilkul na ahshan rehta hain... is ka liya is ma utar ker deikna zarori ha aor hum utarna ka liya taayar nahi hain...

Walekum salam Mir bhai ap ki mohabto ka aseer ho,n bhai ap ke yeh alfaz bohat ehmiyat ke hamil hai,n mere liye sada khush rahiye waslam Mukhlis Ramish jaan
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