@mrs fazal@Ajwah@Veer@Abdullah Nazeer@Mr.Hammad@Falak@sahrish khan Assalam-o-Alaikum! to all ap logon ko islye mention kia k meri ye kawish parh k mujhy zaror btaiye ga kai is me kya galtian hain kya kami hai. Ta k ainda me is se bhtr likh sakon. Insan ko ghalti ka pta ho to usy sudharny ki koshish ki ja skti h warna to ghalti bar bar dohrai jati rhy.
Aur jo bhi active member mention hony se rah gaya us ky lye ma'azrat. Yahan aakar I thnk mujhy ak bhtr platform mila hai aapni raye k izhar k lye. Jazak Allah.
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Bht shukrya @sahrish khan. Allah ny chaha to zaror likhon gi. Aur mujhy yeh chez zada pasnd hai k mery likhy huye koi tanqeed kry phr chahy achi ho ya buri tanqeed. Yeh islye k me jaan sakon k kis trh mazed bhtr bnaya jaye writings ko. Pasnd krny ka shukrya