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Asad Rehman
Super Star Pakistani
@HumaJaved
Yaar ma'noun'day nai ne jehray
Is line men kuch typing mistake he shayed
Bohat alaaa likhti hen
Akhri sher bohat acha lga
Akhri sher mein
Dill wich pa le kamli kali
Bhi theek he
Agar
Gall vich paa lay kali kamli , kesa he
Share kernay ka bohat shukria
@Ali Akbar bhai say bhi suggestion ly letay hen
HumaJaved
Well-Known Pakistani
@Asad Rehman thank you
.
Main androoni kaifiyet kay badlaao ki suggestion
dena chahti thi last shair main is liyeh "gall" nei lagaya,
us ki jegha
agar
"Jigray pa lay"
ya
"Mann wich pa lay" ho jay to kesa hey?
HumaJaved
Well-Known Pakistani
@Imaan Shah Thank you
HumaJaved
Well-Known Pakistani
@Syeda Rumessa Shukria
Ali Akbar
Popular Pakistani
Staff member
Kamli k sath "Gal" ziadah behtar feel huta he...
Personally I feel k line "pharr le Pak
Nabi (peace be upon him) da daman" itself androni change ki traf isharah krti he...
And so beautiful.
Khoob se khoob tar he yahan