Ghazal Tum Loat Aao Na

Bint_e_Hawwa

Bint_e_Hawwa

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Dil ki tangg galiyon main
Jahan tera basaira hai
Jab teri yaad aati hai
Boht kuch toot jata hai

Kabhi tou aa bhi jao na
Kabhi aa kar mujhy dekho
Kesa haal hota hai
Bina tery jo jeeti hun

Mery jazbat ki hiddat boht he be asar rehti
Na kuch ban he pata hai
Na dil yeh zid badalta hai
Jab baz e gasht hoti hai

Suno tum he bata do na
Tmhy kahan se ly aaun
Aany pe zara doori
Kesy mustaqil ho jati

Yeh tum bata do
Kesy bhool jaun jab
Har din se ik nai subha
Tmhara naam leti a

Agar tum ko nahi aana
Zara mujh ko he likh bhejo
Ek e arz kafi hai
Main tum ko yaad karti hun
Mjy tum yad aati ho
 

@Bint_e_Hawwa Boht khoob bass thora bahao ukhra ukhra hey but it is not something that cant be fixed, musalsal likhny ki mashk say inshaAllah zberdest ho jay ga. I can already see the making of a very good poetess :). Keep writing and sharing.
 
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